For my revised soundscape, I decided to expand upon the concept I attempted in class, creating an entirely new one from scratch. I extended the concept of my monster attack from the original soundscape to create a clearer narrative structure. In this soundscape, the spaceship takes off, floats through space, and then the monster attack triggers a chase through the halls, guns firing, and the creepy aftermath of the whole event. I ended up being unhappy with my original soundscape, as I found that it sounded like a collection of space-related sounds rather than a soundscape with any sort of thematic or narrative through-line. I tried specifically in the revision to create a story, so that it wasn’t as aimless compared to the first soundscape.